Really well done with the editing. You got some really good shots, I like a lot of the different perspectives you used. Also like the use of the different filters, although some of the shots may be a bit too over-saturated. Very nice.
I enjoyed the glitchiness on some of the shots, I'll be curious to know what process you used to get those large square artifacts on some of your shots. Some shots worked, others didn't. I think you knew that going into this, but overall good job. We'll work on getting you off any other typeface other than helvetica. In my own opinion, every other typeface looks cheap. I loved the distortion in the first shot.
I seriously approve of the observations found inside this piece. Really took to heart the idea of viewing things from different angles, and the capture of architectural and mechanical components shows how they contrast or compare to each other when one is reflected off the other.
the only thing I'm not too huge on is the use of several different fonts. I'm not picky about any one in particular, but I thought using two different ones on the title card was a stretch, and using a third different one on the tailing card was a bit over done.
I also enjoy the shots you decided to take. I feel like they are all very clear and the camera is steady. I didn't mind that there was no sound. I felt there were too many filters, but it was nice to see such experimentation. My favorite frame is the crosswalk light.
I like the shots with moving objects in them. The reflection of passing cars in the glass is new to me and i liked it. Multiple perspectives of the hunt bridge were neat. I think a few of the frames would have gone particularly well together.
You got some really good footage from around the city. The variety in your shots really captures that "city feel". The zoom on your camera is also incredible and I really like that shot of Reunion Tower. I think your filters were a little random and didn't fit well together though. You should find some type of theme for your filters that fits in with your story.
Really well done with the editing. You got some really good shots, I like a lot of the different perspectives you used. Also like the use of the different filters, although some of the shots may be a bit too over-saturated. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the glitchiness on some of the shots, I'll be curious to know what process you used to get those large square artifacts on some of your shots. Some shots worked, others didn't. I think you knew that going into this, but overall good job. We'll work on getting you off any other typeface other than helvetica. In my own opinion, every other typeface looks cheap. I loved the distortion in the first shot.
ReplyDeleteNice work Juan. Everything is performed well, editing, nice shots. It would be great if you can add sound as well. Nice start.
ReplyDeleteI seriously approve of the observations found inside this piece. Really took to heart the idea of viewing things from different angles, and the capture of architectural and mechanical components shows how they contrast or compare to each other when one is reflected off the other.
ReplyDeletethe only thing I'm not too huge on is the use of several different fonts. I'm not picky about any one in particular, but I thought using two different ones on the title card was a stretch, and using a third different one on the tailing card was a bit over done.
I also enjoy the shots you decided to take. I feel like they are all very clear and the camera is steady. I didn't mind that there was no sound. I felt there were too many filters, but it was nice to see such experimentation. My favorite frame is the crosswalk light.
ReplyDeleteI like the shots with moving objects in them. The reflection of passing cars in the glass is new to me and i liked it. Multiple perspectives of the hunt bridge were neat. I think a few of the frames would have gone particularly well together.
ReplyDeleteYou got some really good footage from around the city. The variety in your shots really captures that "city feel". The zoom on your camera is also incredible and I really like that shot of Reunion Tower. I think your filters were a little random and didn't fit well together though. You should find some type of theme for your filters that fits in with your story.
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